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Beckaney
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Registration date : 2007-02-18

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PostSubject: Electrical Storm   Electrical Storm Icon_minitimeTue Feb 20, 2007 4:50 pm

Deception of an overhaul
A heart drenched in so much pain
Despair stricken name upon her heavy handed heart
Running fast now
Can’t bare the fruits of this deception
Hiding out in the ever growing darkness
Sheltered from the rain that pours
Lightning crashes thunders rolls
And this poor hearts shattered
From the pain of the past


Drought stricken
Heavy handed
Lightning crashes
Thunder rolls
Blood red eyes
The darkest clouds
Naked lands
Drought stricken lands


See the truth now
It is plastered in her eyes
She cried her blue eyes blood red
She can’t find a way a out
Can’t see the silver lining
That is meant to be there with each dark cloud
Her heart so heavy handed
Dragging her further and further down
Way beyond the surface
Of this drought stricken naked land


Drought stricken
Heavy handed
Lightning crashes
Thunder rolls
Blood red eyes
The darkest clouds
Naked lands
Drought stricken lands



Beckaney
18th of February 2007
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Registration date : 2007-02-19

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PostSubject: Re: Electrical Storm   Electrical Storm Icon_minitimeTue Feb 20, 2007 4:59 pm

well i don't have much to say about this one just wow dark cyclops
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